BIND 10 #2305: Document bindctl in the BIND 10 guide
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#2305: Document bindctl in the BIND 10 guide
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Reporter: jreed | Owner: UnAssigned
Type: | Status: reviewing
defect | Milestone:
Priority: | Sprint-20121120
medium | Resolution:
Component: bind- | Sensitive: 0
ctl | Sub-Project: Core
Keywords: | Estimated Difficulty: 7
Defect Severity: N/A | Total Hours: 0
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Comment (by jinmei):
I've only gone through the text, performing sanity checks. I didn't
confirm whether each and every example actually works as documented by
hand, for example.
Specific comments:
- I guess this change may be worth a changelog entry. But I'd leave
it to you.
- I suggest the documentation issue of #2449 is addressed within
ticket, either in the new section 7 or as part of installation.
- some concepts seem to be used before the definition, such as "named
set".
- 7.6 Configuration commands: "but similar to modules" should be
"but similar to commands"?
- 7.6.1. List of configuration commands: "must be (in JSON format)"
why in parentheses? and it doesn't seem to parse well. Maybe
"must be specified (in JSON format)"
- 7.6.2. Configuration data types: the use of ';' and ',' is not
consistent.
- maps: it doesn't explain how to remove stuff from a map.
- the example at the last of "named set" doesn't seem to make much
sense.
- 7.7.2. Notes on execute scripts: "However; as module" should be
"However, as module"?
- 7.7.2. Notes on execute scripts: I was not sure how the second
paragraph relates to execute scripts.
- there's a redundant space at the end of line:
{{{#!diff
+Module Boss Master process
}}}
I'm not sure if this is an issue of XML or in the output of bindctl.
In either case, the XML doc should be fixed. If it's also a bindctl
issue it should also be fixed.
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