BIND 10 #2305: Document bindctl in the BIND 10 guide
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#2305: Document bindctl in the BIND 10 guide
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Reporter: jreed | Owner: jreed
Type: | Status: reviewing
defect | Milestone:
Priority: | Sprint-20121120
medium | Resolution:
Component: bind- | Sensitive: 0
ctl | Sub-Project: Core
Keywords: | Estimated Difficulty: 7
Defect Severity: N/A | Total Hours: 1.25
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Changes (by jelte):
* owner: jelte => jreed
Comment:
Replying to [comment:10 jreed]:
> I made a variety of minor changes. See commit
3d71b86e777c7280043a1191bbeb0bb115f88078 -- please review the content
changes in the diff.
>
look good, thanks.
I noticed one more small issue there; in the section about
default_user.csv, it said 'stores username and password for logging in a
file', which would suggest it would be something about logfiles. Changed
it to 'for logging in in a file' (i.e. double in).
> I also have a few comments:
>
> In the bindctl_command_arguments section, maybe write about it before
examples. (Currently it just uses examples to explain it.)
>
changed that section, is this better?
> ", to add and remove elements." (line 1686) what is this for? Reads
strange or maybe is missing some content?
>
reworded.
> Are the brackets in the list examples [value] required or optional? (See
around line 1683)
>
also reworded (and some more in that paragraph)
> Also the boss chapter examples are shown before bindctl is taught. Maybe
split the boss chapter up into two chapters?
>
Yes, but maybe we should discuss that a bit (i'm thinking that initially
we should only talk about boss as some component that runs the rest, and
how to start the entire system. Then discuss Boss as a module in a
separate chapter (i.e. perhaps simply make 3.2 its own chapter to be put
either after chapter 7 or 8)
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